User:Isbenn/Dark triad/Mkerr30 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Isbenn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Isbenn/Dark triad


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dark triad

Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel like your lead section was too oversimplified. I think you could go into a little more depth and explain (in no more than a sentence) what Machiavelliansim, narcissism, and psychopathy so the reader knows what they're reading about. Also, in your 1st article, could you see if you can cite the actual study; even if it is mentioned within the study. That way it adds more evidence to your findings.