User:Iscucchi/Phthalate/Iscucchi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

iscucchi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Iscucchi/Phthalate&action=edit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Phthalate

Evaluate the drafted changes
The point regarding DINCH needs to be fleshed out more with side effect from use of this alternative that are known, what products this is used in, etc.

Further alternatives need to be added if available.

The "Prevalence and human exposure" area looks underdeveloped, see if you can flesh it out more.

The "other effects" area of the health effect part needs more medical sources. Find something about its link to obesity and the effects this can have on reproduction.