User:Ishachahal/Cloud condensation nuclei/Sganz3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Isachachal, Kyall P, KZhengUBC


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ishachahal/Cloud_condensation_nuclei?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cloud condensation nuclei

Lead:
'''The lead of the article looks really good, it seems like it is the perfect length! The only small change you could consider making is that you probably don't need to define condensation.'''

Content:
The content is very good, it is detailed but not overly long! One thing to consider might be adding more sections to go more in depth about the examples.

Images and Media:
The images you have right now are very good, and are well organized. However, you could consider adding a few more images or diagrams, especially when explaining the different parts of the cloud, or how these meterological processes happen.

Overall:
Your article seems like it is off to a very strong start! I also really like your table at the end, it is extremely helpful!