User:Ishachahal/Cloud condensation nuclei/Sliverash Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ishachahal


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ishachahal/Cloud condensation nuclei


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cloud condensation nuclei

Evaluate the drafted changes
A new sentence is added to the introduction and has edited a few grammar errors. The sentence added gives more information about the topic with decent amount of details that is not too specific but gives a further understanding of the topic. The new content is added neutral with facts only. The introduction is splited into multi-paragraph which it improved the flow of the introduction paragraph. Citation has improved that many uncited facts are now cited. Also, it improved citation format that many citations were located in the middle of a sentence initially, and they are now corrected to the end of a sentence.