User:Isiah.Duggan/Deathcare/Wiki.insight Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nzahid, AubreyPMR, Isiah.Duggan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe the team did a great job of introducing the topic. Each subsection was clearly labeled and organized. The history subsection was very thorough and writers had done a great job of finding relevant and current sources to highlight. I did click on a few sources and all links seem to be working. One quick comment would be modify citation #24 by removing/adding the source date. Furthermore, the tone of the article was neutral and I did not identify any claims that were biased toward a particular position. Overall, I thought the article was very well written, concise, and easy to understand. The featured image definitely improved understanding of the topic and was captioned, and I appreciated that they included information on how COVID-19 affected the practice of death care.