User:IsmaelEden/Welfare reform/Gwugradstudent Peer Review

General info
User: IsmaelEden
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:IsmaelEden/Welfare reform
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Welfare reform

Lead
I think it was a good idea to remove the politics of welfare reform from the lead and into it's own section. I believe that section could be expanded, but I don't want to add on to your work, so that is up to you!

Content, Tone, and Balance
Overall, your additions in the History section about AFDC and TANF was very beneficial to the article. In the United States, that context is important and it gave a better overview/set-up for the next section.

In the context of our class, I do think that some gendered context could be included, especially under the United States history section and it's discussion of women in the labor market. In that section, you could maybe reference social citizenship or care work, for example, to expand.

Overall
Looks good! The article is really good and informative and your additions were great!