User:Isobelpowell/Gum Wall/Oliviaanne2001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

isobelpowell


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Isobelpowell/Gum Wall


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gum Wall

Evaluate the drafted changes
The way you changed the layout of the lead better fits the article now. I will say, however, I feel like the majority of your work on this article thus far has been a reformatting of the original article, I can only find one new sentence you added about instagram hashtags so I have trouble coming up with feedback for things you have added. I think it would be a great idea to add a section under "Recognition" with a list of famous folks who have maybe visited the gum wall. Additionally, adding more pictures of when the gum wall was being cleaned or what it looks like now versus those pictures in 2011 would be a nice touch. The one question I had about the previously written content was regarding the cleaning section. The math doesn't add up to me if they started cleaning Nov 10 and finished Nov 13, but somehow it took 130 hours to clean (I think those dates would make the max 96 hours?). May just be something to double check the dates on or if two sources led to that conflicting timeline.