User:Israel.tharpe/Primitive (phylogenetics)/AsteforiiAlbicans Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Israel.tharpe


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Israel.tharpe/Primitive (phylogenetics)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Primitive (phylogenetics)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I want to be honest—I don’t think this is ready for use on Wikipedia. It doesn’t really talk about primitive as it relates to phylogenetics so much as summer summarizes phylogenetics as a whole— talking about characters, talking about phylogenetic trees but it doesn’t really talk about primitive itself. It’s pretty well written, but I’m just not sure how it could fit into the article. There are some grammatical issue, so I would run it through a program to work over them.

I notice you have reference marks, but they aren’t actually linked to any bibliography in the draft.

All in all, this needs some work before it gets uploaded. The article you picked is a pretty interesting one, in fact it was one of the ones I was thinking of working on for my project. Bring in more information about the use of “primitive” in phylogenetics, and remember that this article is somewhat about the misuse of the word in this field.