User:Israghanim/Picture Exchange Communication System/AmariHau Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Israghanim


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Israghanim/Picture_Exchange_Communication_System?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Picture Exchange Communication System

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your draft is coming along nicely. The content provided gives a nice overview of PECS and its creation. You have presented the information without forcing the reader to only believe in 100 percent success. My comments are below:


 * Article can include the article major sections.
 * Links work great for definitions.
 * Great updated resource from 2021.
 * I would add a link to define "manding" in the article.
 * Effectiveness section could be broken up within the section with a title for concerns as a subsection to give it identify PECS concerns individually.
 * I think adding images or videos to give the the reader a visual of PECS would be helpful for understanding.

I hope these comments can be helpful in editing your article. So far the draft provides a lot of information on PECS, its concerns, and potential difficulties. Best of luck to you.