User:IssaEm/Pelvic inflammatory disease/Amrae43 Peer Review

General info
IssaEm
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:IssaEm/Pelvic inflammatory disease - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Pelvic inflammatory disease - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I think you could combine and make the "Population at risk" section a bit more concise. It is a bit repetitive and I notice a few grammatical errors (i.e. "can result in developing PID" --> can develop OR can result in, "women with more than one sex ual partner, etc)

- Is there any data about epidemiology that could be found about PID on a global scale? The links to studies in the U.S. is good, but Wikipedia is accessible worldwide.

- in the "Prevention" section, it's not bolded, so I'm assuming this is something that was already on the published page, but you could change a small grammatical thing - you would not need to say "& hence", I would just say hence.

- In the "Prognosis" section, there is repeated information when you say, "delaying treatment could increase further complications". I would recommend combining any new information with what the wikipedia page already says above in the "Treatment" section and choosing one best place to put it.

- Overall, I really like the "prognosis" section. It has a lot of good information about what a diagnosis might mean long-term. Just make sure that the citations are correct. I see some hyperlinked citations before a bracketted number that is not hyperlinked. Be sure to clean this up before submitting to make sure they are corresponding to the correct sites.

Keep up the good work!