User:IssaEm/Pelvic inflammatory disease/Nyrenhr8834 Peer Review

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IssaEm
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Editing User:IssaEm/Pelvic inflammatory disease - Wikipedia
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Overall, you did a good job by adding relevant information, but there is one sentence that could use some rewording. I noticed one sentence that could be reworded in a more neutral tone. In the prevention section the phrase “in order to decrease the prevalence of PID”. instead, you could possibly say “to reduce the incidence of PID” or “to mitigate the prevalence of PID” to give it a more neutral tone.

Another thing that you could possibly add is some information in the treatment section on the potential side effects of the different treatments for PID.

In the prognosis section there is a sentence that says “There is a small chance PID may ‘disappear’ or spontaneously resolve itself.” is it possible to add more information on what may cause it to ‘disappear”? Also is there any stats on the likelihood of this happening?