User:IssaEm/Pelvic inflammatory disease/Phwikiproj Peer Review

General info
IssaEm
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:IssaEm/Pelvic_inflammatory_disease?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Pelvic inflammatory disease

Evaluate the drafted changes
Could use more citation in the prevalence/incidence opening paragraph as well as in the "records show" information. This is all good information in this section.

I like that you added who faces the highest burden of PID, but when you say "The highest burden of PID recently" you may want to describe what "recently" means or take out this word because it lacks specificity.

Some capitalization and punctuation errors in several sections, such as "population at risk" and "Distribution/Etiology/Risk factors for PID" along with a couple others.

The prognosis section is really good, I think you got a lot of good information in there. There is one citation (#27) that still needs to be embedded at the end of it though.