User:Itps2022/Catharine Flood McCall/Mec32983 Peer Review

General info

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Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead perfectly reflected the changes made, and the changes that were either to delete phrases, words, or add them created a clearer emphasis on the issue and topic that was being spoken of. It got to the point much easier, and took out unnecessary words from the paragraph. Adds relevant information about Catherine Flood McCall's life, that will prove to be helpful in the long run of explanations and chronology of her life. It removes uncertainties which might create an unease in readers about the reliability of what they are reading, and has overall improved the quality of the paragraphs.