User:Itps2022/Catharine Flood McCall/Sionainn.kriska Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Itps2022


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Editing User:Itps2022/Catharine Flood McCall - Wikipedia
 * Editing User:Itps2022/Catharine Flood McCall - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) The material added to the Lead section of the article provides a further, yet brief, understanding of who Catharine Flood McCall was in the context of history without going too far in depth into who she is. These additions additionally provide clarifications into some information that had been omitted in the original draft of the article. Overall, the additions provided to this article enhance the reader's understanding of the major subject matter and the individual focused on in the article.