User:ItsChowChow/Linepithema fuscum/Barsoumd Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ItsChowChow (Jeongbin Seo)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ItsChowChow/Linepithema_fuscum?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Linepithema fuscum

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:


 * The introductory sentence had enough information to determine what the page will talk about.
 * Consider adding an additional sentence mentioning the body paragraph topics.

Content:


 * Many of your sources seem to be recent.
 * Informative information, but more can be added talking about life cycle or natural environments.
 * Maybe add some pictures to help readers visualize your species.

Tone & Balance:


 * Very neutral and non-biased tone.
 * Your body paragraphs could use more information. Seems a bit over-worded and has little information.

Sources & Relevance:


 * It looks like your first and second sources are duplicates, so removing one might be preferred.
 * Sources are current.
 * Can add more in text links to other wikipedia articles

Organization:


 * Great job for a new article.
 * Content is very well written and is easy to read and follow.

Images & Media:


 * Consider adding some media to give the readers a visualization of your species. Maybe pictures or videos of their natural habitat, or difference between males and females, etc.

Overall:


 * This is a great start, but more information is needed to progress.
 * Great citations to back up your information.