User:ItsPlexiglass/Deccan Traps/Thought22Potato Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ItsPlexiglass


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ItsPlexiglass/Deccan_Traps?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Deccan Traps

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead looks good-- a concise overview of where the Deccan traps are located, the pertinent contextual info about them, and sub-divisions contained within.

Is it possible to expand the entomology section a bit?

Good concise history of the area? Maybe try expanding it a bit to dele into a bit more of the history in-depth?

Theories of formation seems fleshed out well.

Need to include radiometric dating section.

Petrology section looks good, but maybe expand on it a bit more.

Overall, good article start-- maybe try including some imagery (I have no clue what the Deccan traps look like) and try to include a few more references as well to help back up the information you're referencing. Overall, good draft!