User:Itsnotironic/Obelisk/5734hls Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Itsnotironic


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Itsnotironic/Obelisk?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Obelisk

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead Section
 * Your lead section is clear and concise, though I might like to see more about the religious and cultural significance in this section
 * Structure Clarity
 * The structure flows well from ancient to modern, though I would like to see a section with more photos, as well as maybe a section specifically for religious beliefs/practices
 * Coverage Balance
 * I noticed that your article has really good coverage balance so far!
 * It is a bit shorter than the original, but I am assuming you are not quite finished yet!
 * I really appreciate how detailed each section is, and I like the separation between each kind of ancient Obelisk - it helps to differentiate the symbolism of each and to deter generalization
 * Content Neutrality
 * Your content is very neutral, I don't see any issues here!
 * Source Reliability
 * Your draft doesn't have any sources or references attached at the bottom yet, but I can assume that is still in the works!