User:Itztopaz/Jaime Manrique/Escritora-2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Itztopaz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Itztopaz/Jaime_Manrique?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jaime Manrique

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) Check sentences for grammatical errors - There are a few grammatical errors in a few of the draft's sentence such as repeated words. (Minor fixes needed)
 * 2) Citations - Even though the poems and collections mentioned are list in the references, it would still be a good idea to add citations at these points so readers can easily access the resource as they read the article.
 * 3) Another suggestion is to add some more quotations from the poetry/stories as evidence to back up your claims. For example, when the article used "te amaba" to represent gender neutral love. I think this will give the analysis a bit more credibility.