User:Itztopaz/Jaime Manrique/StarKrish Peer Review

The draft has a lot of information which is great. There is some repetition in your sentences that you should fix when proofreading the entry. Make sure you add more in-text citations throughout the entry. Overall, the entry is looking great so far.

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