User:Iuven/Palmate newt/Vle27 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Iuven


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Iuven/Palmate_newt?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your draft is well constructed and easy to follow. The addition information fit well and related to the topic. However, since you only used one source for the statements, I would suggest include both sources for reference. Overall, the section is well-organized and in a sensible way. There is not any phrase or word that try to convince readers to see in one particular point of view.