User:Ivana.mileusnic/sandbox

Article Evaluation: I felt like everything was relevant to the article I didn't feel it straying from the topic and it certainly didn't detract from the article. It was simple and straightforward and i felt that for the most part it did a good job of talking about the book overall. I was a little distracted though by some of the language. I was particularly bothered by the fact that the work "cyberpunk" I'm not sure what it is but it doesn't feel like a particularly good description of the book other than the fact that "cyber" everything is a part of it, but reading the story I didn't get a punk vibe from the story so the fact that it start with that really really bugs me. I feel like it might give the wrong first impression since it is the ninth word in the first sentence.
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4/16/18 what content would you want to contribute? -i would want to actually go ahead and read the book itself to get the full story before I started making any changes. Then i would want to clean up the language and make it a lot less awkward. i would go ahead and rephrase a few paragraphs and I would want to see if there are some better sources for information out there on the novel. what research steps would you take to get that information? -I would use google or google scholar to find articles and sites about the book and try to add in more information sources to make it more reliable sounding. what recommendations would you propose to the style or organization? -try to avoid opening with a statement about a white man, it characterizes too much and may be a turn off to some readers and it does't sound good. Some of the language itself felt very awkward and