User:Ivanaliztorresm/Pearl-Continental Hotels & Resorts/David Torres Montalvo Peer Review

Reviewing - Ivanaliztorresm

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ivanaliztorresm/Pearl-Continental_Hotels_&_Resorts

Content

The Content added its relevant to the topic and it’s up to date but is missing more information than the one given. The article does not deal with one of Wikipedia’s equality gaps because the topic is talking about a 5 star hotel chain that is the largest in Pakistan.

Tone and Balance

The Content added to the work is always talking neutrally but some viewpoints are overrepresented like always referring to it like the five star hotel in Pakistan instead of talking about it in other ways like more in the way of a hotel chain and not always bringing out the five star reference.

The content is always trying to persuade its reader by talking about the five star hotel and the famous and important people that stayed in the hotel

Sources and Reference

Every bit of information added its backed up by its reference and one that its official and reliable.

The References used to back up the edits in the article reflect more information and the literature contained in those references it’s available and open to the reader.

All the Sources used in the article are from various authors and every link works.

Organization

The content in the article is easy to understand and has a clear point of view. It doesn’t have grammatical errors nor spelling but lacks length in its paragraphs.

Apart from that it is well organized but also lacks sections to break down every little thing that can be known about its topic.

Images and Media

The article includes images about the hotel in some of their different locations and are laid out in a visually appealing way.

Every image is captioned and well informed about what the image is trying to show the reader.

Overall Impressions

The Content in the article improved little but improved its quality but still needs work trying to break down the article itself and improving the articles length and information which is too little and needs work talking about the topic.

The strengths found on the article are mostly their images because of their precision and details and the information used to present the content and its achievements.

The content can improve by adding some more information about the topic and adding sections into he content that can be used for secondary but related content. Also putting more images about the hotels insides and some of the working peoples testimony’s about the treatment given to them by the administration

Overall evaluation

The article and its content has potential and with work can become a complete article. Still has some flaws that can be worked with and it needs more length on their paragraphs but it has a precise point of view and a on point topic that again with work can become a fully and all around complete article.