User:Ivanm1234/The Blue Room (Valadon)/Brooke LSB Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ivanm1234


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ivanm1234/The_Blue_Room_%28Valadon%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Blue Room (Valadon)

Lead
The lead could be stronger and include more information about the piece, so I think this would be a good place to add to next.

Content
I think you did a great job expanding on the existing information and using up to date and reliable sources. All of the information you added was neutral and well described. The rewording in the section Social Circumstances was done really well and made it easier to read and comprehend.

Tone and Balance
All of the content is neutral and I think everything that was added is equally representative.

Sources and References
All of the sources are secondary and up to date. The information that was added is accurate with what the sources say, but is in your own words. All of the links work.

Organization
The information added allows the article to flow better by changing the way it was arranged and explaining a lot of the points further. Everything is well explained and concise. There are no grammatical or spelling errors that I saw.

Overall
I think everything added to this article improved it overall. There is a lot of information that can still be added, and it looks like you created an outline for that already. If those sections are just as informative and organized with reliable sources, I think this article will have improved immensely.