User:IvoryTrees/Ki (goddess)/Orcahasenteredthechat Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

IvoryTrees


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:IvoryTrees/Ki (goddess)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ki (goddess)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It has a great layout for a good start and I see that there are citations. The family tree and backstory caught my eye and I can't wait to see what information will be provided. Obviously the only changes that need/should be done is putting in the information.