User:Ivy Zhao 0704/Taoist temple/Peiyu Wan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ivy Zhao 0704


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ivy%20Zhao%200704/Taoist_temple?preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&veaction=edit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead of the article is not changed by my peer, but I think the original lead is good enough. It explains what a Taoist Temple is. The lead doesn’t include any clues of what the article’s major sections will be, and I think that can be a place to improve on and edit. I see that Junhan adds the origin of Taoist Temple and environmental requirements for it. These added contents are relevant and provide strong background information for the topic and makes it easier for the readers to understand and learn more. After reading, I think the content added is very educational and informative. The tone is also very neutral and does not have any biases. Overall, I think it is good quality work and well-written.