User:Iwishmycatcouldtalk/Lilian Lewis/Kmol2023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Iwishmycatcouldtalk


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lilian Lewis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: I think the information that you added was relevant and a good length!

Content: I think all the content you included was worthwhile and well-cited. The only change I would make is to move the early life section to the beginning and create a new section for published works at the end of the article.

Tone and Balance: Some sentences could be clarified a little more, so watch out for sentence length. I think this would keep the tone a little closer to other Wikipedia pages I've read. Overall, most sections are really clear and easy to follow. In particular, I think your links to other pages were helpful and effective.

Sources and References: I don't see any problems with your citations.

Images and Media: N/A, I'm sure you may have had difficulties finding any. I know I did.

Overall impressions: Good work! Clear, concise and well-cited. I think you're on the right track.