User:Iwritesometimes/Young adult fiction/TheWarlock42 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Iwritesometimes (Taylor

Link to draft you're reviewing


 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Iwritesometimes/Young_adult_fiction?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Young adult fiction

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Taylor, wanted to give you some feedback here.

Great Aspects:

The introduction of a history behind the term adolescent is extremely important when talking about YA literature. I think it's inclusion is paramount to enhancing this article.

Things to improve:

I think that it is important to have some work done on the "genre" section. In my opinion, it highlights the major problems that the article has overall; that it has little substance beyond the intial sections.