User:Iza.pieniadz/Andre Richardson King/Mkoster1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Iza.pieniadz/Andre Richardson King


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Iza.pieniadz/Andre_Richardson_King?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this article is a good start and Andre Richardson King definitely seems like a notable designer! It's good that you found 3 sources to prove he is notable but I bet there are some more out there. For example, this article doesn't seem like a citable source but it does seem like a good starting place to find more information that could be verified by better sources

-can you find any more information about his military service?

-this source mentions that his birth year is 1931. could you include this?

-is he still alive?

-this source mentions a few other important years in his life. could you include these dates?

-this sentence is unclear to me: "King was a part of a group of African American designers who had successful careers throughout major Chicago firms after taking advantage of the GI bill to attend local design and art schools." were they really a "group"? did they know each other and coordinate their efforts? if so I think you could add more information about the group. if not I think the word "group" is a little misleading.

-I like that you linked to other wiki pages (like SOM). maybe you could link even more - Harris Trust Bank & O'Hare airport

-not sure if associate partner needs to be capitalized

-can you say more about the "honorary consul" part? it seems interesting