User:Iza.pieniadz/Andre Richardson King/SpicyHamSamson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Iza.pieniadaz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Iza.pieniadz/Andre_Richardson_King?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far, while your planned content seems reasonably well sourced, up-to-date and neutral, it's noticeably lacking in terms of content. There's no proper lead, nothing addressing King's early or personal life, and the article is, at the moment, only one paragraph, with no real sections to split it up. Additionally, I feel like you could take more time to address things that King worked on. You mention Harris Trust Bank and O'Hare Airport, but what exactly did King make in regards to these two clients? What were some aspects of his style? What kind of architecture did he work on? I feel like answering these questions will help flesh out your article a lot more. That being said, at the moment, it's a very strong start.