User:Izaahd/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Indigenous feminism

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I'm curious to see what information has been newly available after years of erasure, how can we get a better context to get better insight into indigenous feminism.

Evaluate the article
The lead is very good at identifying who indigenous feminism impacts, but it does not rely on sources that illustrate much detail on indigenous feminist ideas. There seems to be repetition in each paragraph paraphrasing the same thing over and over again.

The content has a lot of good information, but it has a lot of story testimonies that are long winded quotes and do not paraphrase the information properly.

There is a good usage of academic sources, but I feel the tone very hostile towards white feminism. Understandably it is a hot topic for some, however more empirical professionalism is needed.

Has no images or media, but has a heavy use of WikiLinks with an amazing structure.

Overall it was an amazing design with amazing information, howver I do not feel it entirely encompasses indigenous feminism. It reads as more of a guide of the idea rather than a researched factual entry about events, precursors, and effects in a more scientific manner rather than so qualitative and repetitive.