User:Izaahd/Mujeres Creando/Daniela17valadez Peer Review

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Mujeres Creando
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 * User:Izaahd/Mujeres Creando
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I enjoyed reading this article and especially appreciated its conciseness. However, I would say the language comes off as biased in some instances. For example, "Work should not be survival it should be for the sake of working." is very opinionated, and although I entirely agree, Wikipedia articles should be neutral in terms of opinions.