User:Izabelpedone/Kim kardashian/Sarahhvicari Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Izabelpedone


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Kim Kardashian
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kim Kardashian

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think it would be beneficial to create a section on some of Kim's products that are not discussed in the article.

The wealth section is kind of small for someone who is known for being so wealthy, maybe consider adding to it.

There is a list of awards she has won, maybe elaborate on some of them.