User:Izzbellv/Lesbian erasure/Dlapis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Izzbellv


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Izzbellv/Lesbian_erasure?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lesbian erasure

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

It is unclear what edits you have made to the original article. The only difference I found between the sandbox draft and the initial article was the removal of quotations from the cited sentence "five openly-lesbian role models." Was the original citation incorrect?

Maybe consider adding to the article as well, possibly through additional content or uploading relevant images or media that accurately reflect that topic.

The source you included in your references was reliable and and relevant to your assigned article.

Your bibliography is missing the necessary explanation regarding why the reference is reliable and credible.