User:Izzys.young/Kaela Singleton/Rky497 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Izzys.young


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Izzys.young/Kaela_Singleton?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kaela Singleton

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your introductory paragraph is good and provides a good summary for your individual!

All of your information seems up-to-date, relevant, and neutral, so keep that up! I would definitely try to add more information or specifics into the sections about her research and outreach so we can get a full grasp of the work that she has done in her career.

For the order, I feel like putting outreach right after the research section would be good. Then, following that with awards and then publications makes the most sense to me!

I would also try to fill the article up with some more references if you are able to! Maybe link the select publications!

The page you have has a lot of necessary information that helps me to get to know your uncommon leader, but maybe adding more information (whether that be before or after you are able to talk to her) would give the reader a better grasp of Kaela's work.