User:J. Smile (Love & V.A.V.I)/Conciseness

To keep article concise, the introduction and many other section other than History and similar section should only contain the latest information in present. Anything that is outdated should be removed entirely or moved to History section. It is unnecessary to mention when something is implemented, as this is also the purpose of history information.

Here's the bad example about how to write good articles. Highlight in black  is redundant/history information.

Source: Onewe (Korean: 원위, stylized in all caps, pronounced [wʌnˌwi]) is a South Korean alternative rock band composed of five members: Yonghoon, Harin, Kanghyun, Dongmyeong and CyA. Onewe originally formed under the name M.A.S 0094 (Make a Sound 0094) which consisted of the same five members. They released the digital single "Butterfly, Find a Flower" on August 13, 2015 under Modern Music. Later, they released two EPs: "Feeling Good Day" (2016) and "Make Some Noise" (2017), which was their last release as M.A.S 0094.

In June 2017, they moved to RBW and were renamed MAS. In June 2018, it was announced that the band would redebut under the new band name, ONEWE. The band officially made its redebut on May 13, 2019 with their first single album 1/4. The issue with this is that old information is scattered with new information. The introduction should state the current description of a subject. History information is good, but for clarity, it should be described in the chronological order in a single place: the History section of the article.