User:J123softball/Wild Cat (Hersheypark)/Meli8739 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(J123softball)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:J123softball/Wild Cat (Hersheypark)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wild Cat (Hersheypark)

Peer review:

- Add additional info of events that occurred if possible

- what could be potential experiences of the ride ( if possible)

- this info about the wild cat makes it interesting to read the article

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)