User:J43won 77/Lee Jung-seob/Chitimes2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

J43won 77


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:J43won%2077/Lee_Jung-seob?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lee Jung-seob

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The layout and draft is very good. There seems to be a great structure to the article and it'll flow well