User:J47211/Bhatia–Davis inequality/Philipphaku Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

J47211


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:J47211/Bhatia–Davis_inequality?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bhatia–Davis inequality

Evaluate the drafted changes
It seems like J47211 hasn't started editing his/her Wikipedia project yet.

The article currently has a lot of room to modify. The article right now relies too much on references to primary sources; it can be improved by adding secondary or tertiary sources. Also, images and tables are good tools to help understand the concept, especially statistic-related topics. A few examples would also help new readers who do not have a deep statistic background understand the topic.

Explaining why "The Bhatia–Davis inequality is stronger than Popoviciu's inequality on variances" with examples, numbers and equations would make the statement more plausible. The article currently also has a few grammar errors such as "a minimum" instead of "minimum".

Dividing the article into sections and starting with the table of content and lead would be a good start. Also, changing into another topic is another option if the current topic does not have much content to add or modify.