User:JAVermont/Patagonia, Inc./Pebbles-310 Peer Review

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I reviewed the article on the company Patagonia. The article was very well written and gave a good background on the company’s initiatives as well as the issues the company has faced. The first section also gives the audience a brief understanding of why the company is doing so. However, I wish that there was a statistic about how the company is doing with so, somewhere along the lines of how much product is part of the program, is their revenue gained, or even when it started. I think this would just give a better picture of the program to show its impact. Also, although I believe that this would be touched upon in your final paper, I don’t see the correlation between the mix-up in feathers and climate change. Although I could just be oblivious. I think more detail on this would give a reader, who had no knowledge of either issue, a better understanding of the severity of it. Overall, the contribution is a great start and sheds light on initiatives and issues the average consumer may know nothing about