User:JAckerley/Refrigerator/Bibliography

You will be compiling your bibliography and creating an outline of the changes you will make in this sandbox.

Outline of proposed changes

 * make some coypedit changes- there doesn't seem to be a lot of these
 * filling in citations where applicable
 * finding spots where citations are needed
 * any grammar or spelling mistakes
 * fixing wordy or unclear sentences
 * Revamping the "Effect on Lifestyle" section of the article
 * it is a surface level scratch into the impact of the refrigerator on social life.
 * most of my research has been towards this aspect of the Wikipedia page
 * most of the rest of the article seems to be well fleshed out while this was put in as a slight after thought
 * interestingly this idea that its an afterthought parallels with the general ideas in the class abut how most people don't think of the everyday slight changes that new technology brings, and these changes are seen less in technologies that are older or very popular, or both.
 * Adding to sections that are week or need further explanation.
 * section on government programs
 * section of supermarket refrigerators