User:JB3R2BOO/Juvenile delinquency/BL Elsner Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) JB3R2BOO


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JB3R2BOO/Juvenile_delinquency?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Juvenile delinquency
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Juvenile delinquency

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Added their lead and references to their sandbox. Not sure if they have added anything new yet.