User:JB3R2BOO/Juvenile delinquency/Jenkint6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JB3R2BOO


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JB3R2BOO/Juvenile_delinquency?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Juvenile delinquency

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall you have provided good information to add to this article. You have done a good job at finding sources to help make it a notable article. But I would try to cite more information within your lead as only one part of it has a citation. It is preferable to cite as much information as possible and everything be supported. I would also try to expand on your information and furthering the research you have conducted. Also adding some information to the body might be helpful to expand on your information within the lead. Overall you have a very strong contribution besides the small amount of citations at critical points. You also did a very good job at linking other articles within the article.