User:JB3R2BOO/Juvenile delinquency/SonnyBarnes1010 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JB3R2BOO


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JB3R2BOO/Juvenile_delinquency?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Juvenile delinquency

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that you are have yourself a very good start here and are on your way to do great job with the final revision assignment for a wikipedia topic. While reading through your edits, I noticed that all the hyperlinks worked and that there were a lot of them which is always a good thing. You added some valuable information about Japan into the article which is good. What was more impressive was that you found three references to back up this information. One could have been good, but going above and beyond and finding three is very good sign that you will do a good job with the rest of your paper. Your grammar was good and the flow was also good. You defiantly improved the quality of the original article. Good work.