User:JCAW1/Game & Watch series/ZayMcCoy Peer Review

In the article I liked how everything was laid out and the article didn't fall off topic really at all. I felt the talking about Nintendo characters that Game and Watch were apart of or the things other systems use from Game and Watch was interesting. I felt almost no bias in the article and felt like I learned a lot about a 2d characters that I see in a fighting game we play today. What I need to do in my article that this article does is list things in a way that makes sense and has information to go with it. My things about the article is that I wish the reception was a bit longer because one sentence about the character seems bias with no other website or company commenting on the character. A thing in article that needs to be looked into is the links that are use are really old some being 10+ years. I say if you improve the Reception, links, and find some more Legacy things for Mr. Game and Watch I feel the article would be even more complete.


 * This peer review should have been left on the user's talk page. I know you left a note there, but you did not link to your review. —Grlucas (talk) 13:03, 2 July 2020 (UTC)