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Biocybernetics article questions

 * Everything in the article is relevant
 * The article is neutral
 * It seems most viewpoints are underrepresented due to the articles short length
 * Only one reference had a link (though it did link to a PDF of the entire book) which did support the claims in the article
 * No Facts in the text are cited. The one linked source is "An Introduction to Cybernetics", which lays out what cybernetics is, and seems neutral
 * The most recent source is from 1972, so the article could definitely use some more recent sources. More talking about notable research done in the field could be added. More of anything on-topic could be added really.
 * The only talk page entry is someone suggesting the article redirect to "Systems Biology" with no reply in 2008.
 * The Article is rated as Start Class and ranked of High Importance. It is within the scope of "Wikiproject Systems"


 * The article seems to lack proper in-text citations and has few sources. This lack of many sources likely contributes to it's short length.

MS&T Article Stuff
Suggested New Content Order

History (same) -Changes in hierarchy and name -Chancellors -Historic $300 million dollar gift -Military Service

Campus (moved some buildings here that were in academics) -Missouri S&T Stonehenge -Millennium Arch -Leach Theatre -Curtis Laws Wilson Library -Havener Center -Hasselmann Alumni House -The Puck -Solar Village -Kummer Student Design Center -Nuclear Reactor (moved from academics) -Experimental Mine (moved from academics) -Electromagnetic Compatibility Laboratory (moved from academics) -Gale Bullman/S&T Fitness Center (new addition, thought it was odd athletics section didn't mention it)

Academics (removed parts about places since that fits better with campus) -Rankings -Student engineering projects --Solar House --Engineers Without Borders --etc

Athletics (same) -Club and intramural sports

Student Life (same) -Student media -Honor societies -Greek life -Traditions

Notable Individuals (consolidated 2 small sections into 1) -Notable Faculty -Notable Alumni

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Peer Review by K8shep (talk) 18:53, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
These ideas look really good--moving the organization of the article looks like it makes a lot of sense. You don't have a whole lot here for me to review, content-wise. But do think about things like: what could I add that is substantive? Meaning, more than just a reorganization, you need to add important and notable information. What can you do here? Contact the man over at the student design center whose contact information I sent you. There will be plenty there. If you need more help, let me know.

Peer Review Response by JCL564

When thinking about what can be added to the article, I would add more info about building history and usage history, possibly including equipment available at the design center. Adding to the usage, one of my group members has started to add information about the design teams as well. I agree I need more substantive information; I plan to add more information after seeing what citeable information the contact at the design center has available. Later I may expand other sections of the university’s article that seem overly lightweight. =Kummer Student Design Center=

The Kummer Design Center is located at 1051 N Bishop Avenue, Rolla, Mo. The Kummer design Center is home to the SDELC. The SDELC stands for, "Student Design Experiment Design Center." 20 of the university's design teams are housed inside of the SDELC. The Kummer Design Center is also home to a Jimmy John's and a Spoon Me. This is part of the building that used to house the Student Rec Center; before that it was a Holsum Bread Bakery.

The area where the Design Center stands was formerly known as the Miner Recreation Center, which was later renovated into the Kummer Student Design Center. The Kummer Design Center was dedicated on May 20, 2011. It was named after Fred and June Kummer who donated $1.25 million of the $2.75 million project, which was funded entirely by private gifts to the university. Fred Kummer is an alumni of the University. The Kummer Design Center is a 23,000 square foot building.

On April 26, 2019 a Mars Rover designed by S&T's Mars Rover Team broke ground on the expansion for the Kummer Design Center. The expansion added 8000 square feet to the Kummer Design Center.

The area where the Design Center stands was formerly known as the Miner Recreation Center. In 2010 the Recreation Center received a 2.75 million dollar ($1.25 million was contributed by Fred and June Kummer) renovation that turned it into the Kummer Student Design Center.

=James E. Bertelsmeyer Hall= Bertlsmeyer Hall is located at the intersection of 11th street and State Street. The Construction of James E. Bertelsmeyer Hall broke ground in April 2013. It was named after James E. Bertelsmeyer, who contributed $5 million towards it's construction. The Building is the current home of the Chemical and Biochemical Engineering Department.

==Academic Organization=

The College of Arts, Sciences, & Business (CASB) contains 13 Departments
 * Arts, Languages, and Philosophy
 * Biological Sciences
 * Business and Information Technology
 * Chemistry
 * Economics
 * English and Technical Communication
 * Global Engineering
 * History and Political Science
 * Mathematics and Statistics
 * Military Science
 * Physics
 * Psychological Science
 * Teacher Education and Certification

The College of Computing and Engineering (CEC) contains 10 departments
 * Chemical and Biochemical department
 * Civil, Architectural, and Environmental Engineering department
 * Computer Science Department
 * Electrical and Computer Engineering Department
 * Engineering Management and Systems Engineering
 * Geosciences, Geological, and Petroleum Engineering
 * Materials Science and Engineering
 * Mechanical and Aerospace Engineering
 * Mining and Explosives Engineering
 * Nuclear Engineering and Radiation Science

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