User:JCLemke/Letter (alphabet)/Fadude Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JCLemke


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JCLemke/Letter_%28alphabet%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Letter (alphabet)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Only a specific section has been drafted so far, and the only issue that is apparent is that citations seem to far and in between. For instance, the second paragraph has no citation at the end of it, making it unclear as to whether it is sourced or not. If it is sourced, it is unclear which source is used for the second paragraph. Overall, the content added and the other changes made improve the clarity of the section, while still being concise. Sources do not appear to plagiarize in any way, and sentences written in the current draft appear to be original. The added images also help to make the subject easier to understand and serve as good points of reference. Sources themselves could be more detailed in the citation section, perhaps with the addition of an ISBN or ASIN helping to legitimize the source more.