User:JCSmith123/Perseus/Abbynlew Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jcsmith123


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JCSmith123/Perseus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Perseus

Evaluate the drafted changes
The new content added to the topic "Perseus" is relevant. I like how they added the section about Perseus in pop culture because I feel as if that is very unique thing to contribute to being that pop culture today is everywhere. This new content is also very neutral as it is hard to be one sided on this topic. I only found a few errors in the grammar mostly dealing with comas but nothing further than that such as spelling. I also found it was very easy to read because of how it was organized. I liked the sections it was broken up into including mythology, pop culture, and constellation. All the links work that I checked and they all fall under reliable resources The authors of all these resources are diverse and do not show any bias. Although there was no new images added, I did not feel as it hindered the page at all. Overall, all of the content added is clear, organized, and cited correctly and they only thing I would suggest would be to go over grammatical commas one more time.