User:JCaluya99/David Good/Mari1211 Peer Review

Peer review
Work being reviewed is the Wikipedia biography to David Good. This is a new article that is being added to Wikipedia as there is no existing entry for David Good. Knowing very little about this character, I was able to get the basic information I needed to know about this person. The information is concise, clear and easy to read. There are some errors on punctuation but none that I noticed on grammar. The titles to the paragraphs are like other I am used to seeing on other Wikipedia and there is a good flow to this entry. The title also shows valuable and relevant information to the topic.

A brief background about his mother would be beneficial as there is a Wikipedia entry for his father but not his mother (none that I found). An underrepresented statement would be that there is no mention of why David Good wanted to go back and learn his heritage. A suggestion would be to add to the reasoning why Good wanted to go back and learn about his heritage. Adding this would be best done without any bias or to persuade the reader towards one position and away from another. The reader may not know why he wrote a book or why he would want to go back to get back to his Yamonami roots. Also, adding why his mother was “estranged” would be beneficial to the entry. The article is supported by reliable secondary sources independent from the subject. For example there is links to the locations mentioned in the article. More sources can be added to location of where the Yanomami tribe resides and the book that Good wrote.

If there are other siblings to David Good, adding them would supplement the article. Unless there is more information about his film apperances, I would eliminate that title and just add it to the bottom where the "references" section would be added. Overall, there foundation to this added Wikipedia entry is very similar to others and seems to stand by the expected guidelines from Wikipedia.