User:JD3374/The Paris Bible/Public Scrutony Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * JD3374
 * The Paris Bible

Lead

 * Decent lead providing the range of years the Latin Bible was widely used and what distinguished it from other Bibles

Content

 * Could use more definitions (I don't know what the Octateuch is but I appreciate the (notes in the parentheses) that explain the Sapiential books
 * Can the list of books be made more concise in terms of spacing?
 * Can tell this is a work in progress as some sentences are not joined
 * Needs expansion of the "Readers and Owners" section

Tone and Balance

 * Seems like a good neutral tone

Sources and References

 * Formatting of sources
 * In-text hyperlink (I think links to non-Wikipedia articles should be in the reference list because Wikipedia users expect in-text hyperlinks to send them to other Wikipedia articles)
 * Could use more citations

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Grammar
 * Fluctuation between writing out of centuries (13th and thirteenth) - would prefer to see one style consistently adopted