User:JEMGC/Washington Trails Association/Alaina.marcotte Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JEMGC


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JEMGC/Washington_Trails_Association?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Washington Trails Association

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Good job collecting a good range of reliable sources to use and citing them through out your work
 * Maybe add some pictures of trails so that the page has some dimension to it
 * good job with having a consistent neutral tone throughout your work
 * continue expanding your stewardship section, you mention the six principles. You could add these in and explain them
 * Expand your lead a little more so that it reflects the work that you have added and gives a more detailed overview
 * great job linking to other articles, this is something I need to do in my own work
 * if you wanted to add a section you could talk about their online presence/ resources they offer to hikers. This could fit in to the point you make in your lead about how WTA promotes hiking
 * Great job having no grammar or spelling errors that I could find, your sentences flow with each other and do not read awkward